The Feldspar Column: Editorial Oversight

Nine column inches of hot throbbing opinions

Welcome back to the Feldspar Column, fellow smutters, erotica enthusiasts, and readers of finely-hewn raunch. This year I was lucky enough to get my erotic barbarian story, The Beast of Balduun, published by Uruk Press. Based in the UK, it offers multiple lines of quality erotica, from more mainstream-leaning stories to full-on filthy raunch-fests. Check them out!

The genesis of the novella came about because I saw a call for submissions for an Uruk Press short story anthology. I had submitted a short story called “The Beast of Balduun.” Unfortunately, I didn’t make the anthology, but on the positive side, Uruk Press wanted me to turn the short story into a novella. (Note: The original short story was 8000 words; the novella 40,000 words.) An intimidating prospect, but also an opportunity to expand the world of the short story and allow for character development, world-building, and bigger sex scenes.

Getting published meant working with an editor. In this case with Philippa Martinez. My other stories have been self-published, so I was incredibly happy to have an extra set of eyes looking at my work. Overall, my experience was positive. I didn’t feel like my “artistic vision” was compromised or I had to sacrifice things to make it more “marketable.” Philippa’s main objective remained making The Beast of Balduun a high-quality product. This involved polishing and sharpening the writing.

Throughout the editing process, Philippa and I collaborated on making the novella the best it could be possibly be. This involved focusing on three specific things:

  1. Grammar and Writing

The first aspect was the most crucial and the most challenging … at least to me, the author. Despite having an advanced degree from an established university, it was not in English. I can be a stickler for correct usage, but I am not an expert in the field. The appropriate times to use “that” and “which” always trip me up. Computer programs help with grammar and usage, but they are also not perfect. When self-publishing my smutty tales, I usually had to double- and triple-check them myself, hoping I didn’t miss anything. This is especially difficult after writing a piece, since it’s been written and revised and polished by me. Even in the best circumstances, a word could be dropped or a homonym missed (there, their; two, too, to) because I am too familiar with the story.

Self-publishing Pro Tip: After you’ve completed your story, put it away. At minimum for a day, preferably longer. Then you can come back to it fresh. When you see it with fresh eyes, the obvious errors are easier to pick up.

In any case, Philippa aided me in spotting those tricky grammatical flubs and goofs. In the end, it made the piece – despite its unmitigated raunchiness – a professional product.

Self-publishing Pro Tip: Once you put your story out there for the public, all your errors and goofs are there for the public to nit-pick and criticize. So make sure someone else looks at it. Find a First Reader and/or Beta Reader, or look for a creative writing group. (For smutty, adult-oriented stories, I would highly suggest the Erotica Readers and Writers Association, aka ERWA.)

With grammar, the smallest things stand out. A grammatically incorrect phrasing or misspelling will be a major distraction. Especially when you want your reader to really get into your story. Nothing can kill arousal quicker than bad grammar. Irregardless …

  1. Continuity

Philippa was a great help with story continuity. Since The Beast of Balduun was a sword and sorcery tale, an added layer of continuity involved geography, magic systems, and fantastic beasts. Since the eBook lacked a map and glossary, we had to make things clear for the reader. During the drafting stage, my main goal was to finish the damn thing. I also revised it along the way before handing it over to Philippa.

In terms of continuity, we made additions and cuts. Because I, the author, wrote the story, it all made sense in my head. (Lord knows, I had the thing knocking around my skull for over a year. Thinking and re-thinking, story-breaking, etc.) Unfortunately, what seems obvious to me might be confusing, contradictory, or nonsensical to a new reader. One of the many challenges of writing is translating what’s in your imagination to what’s on on the page. No Self-Publishing Pro Tip for that, just: Good luck with that.

During the editorial process, Philippa caught some geographical errors and assisted me in having my exotic locales make sense. Sometimes things needed to be underlined for the reader. At other times, I would drop lengthy exposition in order to communicate the same point with a throwaway line of dialogue.

  1. Upping the sexiness

Having self-published three short stories (which you should totally read!), I thought I had a handle on how erotic to make things. Philippa worked to up the ante with the erotic scenes. “Make it sexier!” to adapt the saying by Ezra Pound (“Make it new.”)

Despite my preconception that I thought my earlier draft was as erotic as possible, Philippa’s editorial eye found places where the smuttiness was amplified. It was a criticism I wasn’t expecting, since the novella was pretty raunchy to begin with.

Yet another reason to have another reader look over your work before releasing it to the public.

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In addition to these points, Philippa was generous in terms of what to achieve by what deadline. As I was writing the novella, she kept the due date open-ended. Since Uruk Press is a small operation, I had some waiting periods, since she had other tasks involving the press.

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The Housewife and the Heat Wave explicit excerpt

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The Housewife and the Heat Wave”

During his summer vacation Kevin, a college sophomore, works mowing lawns to pay for college. Lana, a bored housewife, becomes the object of his lusts. Swept up in the high temperatures of a lazy summer afternoon, Kevin works hard to avoid temptation.

Here’s an erotic excerpt:

Then he came to Lana and Dutch’s house. With the sun still up, he came upon Lana sunbathing in the backyard. Those not immediately drawn to her sweaty cleavage, bared in a revealing string bikini, would have noticed the high grass. She sat on a chaise lounge with daisy dukes that seemed downright illegal, mirrored sunglasses, and a beach towel beneath her perfect sculpted form. Like some Vallejo barbarian queen made flesh. Any lingering infatuations with Sandra Bullock instantly evaporated.

Uh, hello Mrs. Heller,” Kevin said. He prayed he didn’t have an erection.

Oh, hi Kevin, I didn’t hear you arrive,” she said with her usual smile. “Want some lemonade?”

Yeah, sure, that would be great.”

Look at her face, just look at her face, not at her tits, oh god those huge tits, god I just want to suck

Some heat, eh?” she said. “Be back out.”

She bent over and moved the chaise lounge over to the patio. Now Kevin knew he had an erection. Thankfully the garage door opened and he rushed inside to take out the lawn mower. He wanted to find a place to readjust his pants. Or ideally to shoot his load so he wouldn’t make an ass of himself in front of Lana.

Here you go,” she said as she handed him the tall glass of lemonade. “Don’t kill yourself out here. Have you heard those news reports of those people killed by heat stroke?”

Yeah, totally, I mean, yeah I did,” Kevin said.

Smooth, genius, he thought to himself. You sound like a loser asshat.

He tried not to drink too fast. Didn’t want the headache.

Just look at her face just look at her face just look at—

Take your time. No prize for first place on days like these.”

Mowing the lawn presented a challenge. It took a heroic effort to manhandle the lawnmower over the thick grass. Not only did it become unbearably hot in the last couple weeks, but the heat only abated during the sudden downpours. But the moisture quickly evaporated to linger in the air, turning life into a thick humidity blanket people muscled through. That end result made the grass thick and wet. Several time he crouched down to clean out the bottom of the mower, clawing at thick wads of green grass so bright it seemed cartoonish.

Lana continued to sunbathe, soaking up every last ray as the sun made its slow descent across the suburban rooftops. As Kevin fussed with the choked up lawnmower he tried not to gawk, but at the heat kept beating down on his neck and face, it became impossible to resist the subtle charms of her bared flesh.

No Dutch and no kids, he thought. That’s strange.

His parents had fled the heat and humidity for a week up north at the family cabin. Kevin rejected offers to join them, but mainly because small size of the cabin would exacerbate the tension he felt. The one or two days by himself became a physical godsend. Jerking off became less a chance to bury himself in his carnal fantasies than a desperate race to ejaculate before getting caught in the act. He had enough lectures these days. Maturity and having a sense of urgency and re-purposed business-speak hammered into parental platitudes only to get even more heaped on him because he needed to jack off every once in a while. He had urges. Christ!

Everything OK?” Lana asked.

Sure, everything’s fine,” Kevin replied.

Heat made time murky and fluid.

He didn’t realize how long he had stood there. The mower came back on and he returned to his task.

He didn’t know how long it took, but he did it. The lawn was done, trimmed down to an even height, like Dutch’s buzz cut. Or a half-decent putting green on a public course.

Kevin put the lawnmower away and then attended to weeding and edging for a few minutes. By the time he finished, he realized sweat soaked his shirt and pants.

How about another lemonade?” Lana asked.

Thanks, Mrs. Heller,” he said wiping the sweat and grit off his brow.

You can call me Lana. Come on inside and sit down. Get out of that beastly heat.”

Kevin followed.

She poured him another tall glass of lemonade and threw on a white button down shirt over her bikini that had draped a nearby chair.

Sit down,” she said. “Tell me about your college plans.”

Nothing definite yet. Still looking at all the classes.”

You’re going to State, right?”

Yep, up at the capital. My dad went there. For architecture, I think.”

You don’t seem the architecture type.”

I don’t?” Kevin appeared momentarily shocked.

I saw the way you stared at Dutch’s books. Bet you have a nice library of your own.”

I have a few books here and there. Where is Mr. Heller, by the way?” Did that just come out of my mouth? What the fuck, dude?

He’s at a business seminar in Vegas.”

That place has got to be real hot,” Kevin said. “The desert in summer.”

Yes, but they say it’s a dry heat. The kids are each at a sleepover. Usually I’m tripping all over them. Oh well, lucky me. All alone. Kevin, it is nice to have a little peace and quiet for a change.”

Alone? Kevin thought. What was that term they used in American Pie?

Want another glass?”

Sure, yeah,” Kevin said.

The sudden hardness of his dick surprised him. In his mental search for non-trite phrases during the conversation, he tried not to act too self-conscious. He did notice how much lemonade he drank. The stiffness in his pants was either from drinking so much or from Lana. Or both. If he drank anymore, he’d have to use the bathroom. This forced two options upon him. Go take a piss, ride home, jerk off, and then spend the night watching Office Space again. Or he could rub one out in the bathroom after taking a piss and then keep having a sensible conversation with Lana, a sophisticated, albeit smokin’ hot adult.

The conversation proceeded without incident until his bladder overpowered the hectoring from his famished loins. Riding a bike with a full bladder was no fun. He didn’t want to miscalculate either, only to find himself crouching behind some neighbor’s tree in broad daylight because he was too bashful to take a piss in Lana’s bathroom.

Jesus, idiot, grow a fucking pair already!

Once again, Kevin resorted to over-thinking the obvious.

Can I use your bathroom?” Kevin asked.

Oh, sure, first door on your right,” Lana said.

I should remember that. Nickel tour and all.”

Kevin got up and walked to the bathroom. He didn’t want to look too eager.

All the over-thinking and embarrassment evaporated when he unzipped his pants, withdrew his member, and exhaled. What followed was the most relaxing piss he had in a while. The only other times he felt like this occurred during camping trips or overlong hiking expeditions.

Like that scene in Austin Powers, he thought to himself with a silly grin.

What happened next seemed less like a linear series of events than a half-imagined haze. Instead of immediately flushing after an overlong piss, he kept his cock out and he began to rub it. Tenderly at first, then more vigorously. Lana in her bikini tanning stiffened him up.

If I can get just get off, Kevin thought. Then I can talk to her comfortably.

With that rather frail reasoning Kevin continued to masturbate. Unfortunately for Kevin, he didn’t know how long he had been away. Kevin jerked off with a single-minded intensity.

Just relax, think of Lana, naked Lana, licking her body, wet heaving tits –

His hand fondled his rigid cock, stiffening while his palm massaged the swollen head.

Is everything OK?” she asked, knocking on the door.

Yeah, sure, OK, yeah,” Kevin stammered. “Things are great!”

He flushed the toilet. Then he worked to put away his comical erection. His eyes nailed to his shorts, he attempted to push it back inside.

Can I come in?” she said. “Don’t want you coming down with heat stroke. I’ll have to—”

Time seemed to stop.

Mrs. Heller … I can explain … I need to go … I’m OK,” Kevin babbled.

Just what were you doing, young man?

I need to go, I need to go,” Kevin blurted, his mind in complete panic. He was ready to run over Lana like a crazed animal.

Calm down,” she said. “It’s OK, I said. This is a natural thing for boys to do.”

She edged closer to him. He could see the sweat on her breasts and her nipples, erect beneath the thin fabric of the bikini top.

It’s going to be OK. Do you understand?”

I didn’t … I mean … I’m sorry,” Kevin said, he forced back tears.

No, no, no, don’t cry. Don’t do that. We’re going to make this better, OK?”

Sure, yeah, I’m sorry.”

Don’t apologize,” she said, giving him a kiss on the cheek. “You didn’t do anything wrong.”

But with Dutch, I didn’t mean to.”

Shh,” she put a finger up to her beautiful lips. “Dutch isn’t here. The children aren’t here. I’m all alone. I’m going to make things better.”

Suddenly Kevin realized she had unzipped his jeans. Her fingers clenched his rigid cock.

Your girlfriend must be very lucky,” she said with a kiss on the opposite cheek.

I don’t have one. I’m still … still a …”

Shh, no talking, I’m taking care of you now.”

She withdrew his penis from his underwear and began to stroke it. His body flinched as her fingers closed around his swollen shaft.

It’s OK,” she whispered. “Everything’s OK.”

Kevin shut his eyes and bent his head back, his body consumed by a pleasure by her slow, precise stroking … then … she undid her top.

Feel me,” she said. “Feel these.”

With her free hand, she took one of Kevin’s sweaty palms and placed it on her breast. He opened his eyes and stared at her naked breasts. Covered in sweat and glistening beneath the harsh light of the bathroom, Kevin couldn’t keep his eyes off them, least of all her hard nipples.

Then she came closer to him and they kissed. The tentative first kisses led to more passionate ones, their mouths open, their tongues intertwined.

Yes, Kevin, yes,” she said as she continued to stroke his ever-lengthening cock, now lubricated with a silky layer of pre-cum.

Kevin momentarily stared at her large nipples, beautiful and dark and erect, before his mouth enclosed around one. He tongued it with greed, his body consumed with lust to taste and bite her.

Slow down, boy, no need to rush. I’m not going anywhere.”

After he licked the areola of one nipple, he bent over and licked the other nipple. His cock stiffened again, pulsing with a need for release.

Take your time. Enjoy them. Taste,” she said. “I want you to last a little longer. It’s no fun if you go off right away.”

His hand pinched her nipple, his mind busy in a desperate effort to recreate the images he saw in sex manuals. The smell of her flesh and the taste of her body created a heady rush. He tensed up again when he realized he was near orgasm.

Feel that?” she asked.

Kevin nodded, the base of his cock clenched tight by her fingers.

I’m going to stroke you some more. Then, when you are just about ready, I’m going to release my other hand. Do you understand?”

Yes,” he said. “Oh God, I’m so hard.” He shuddered when he said those words.

Lana alternated between pumping his cock and massaging the swollen head. Each time Kevin prepared himself for the pleasurable release, but the pleasure kept piling up. One on top of the other.

He bit his lower lip and gripped the sink, knuckles white with tension. With his other hand, he gripped her breast, his sweaty palm pressing against a hardened nipple.

Does this feel good?” she asked.

Yes,” he said. A tear began to roll down his cheek.

Do you want me to go faster?”

He nodded dumbly, his body suspended by Lana’s aggressive pumping. Only when he opened his eyes did he realize he wasn’t suspended six inches above the ground.

Kevin, are you ready?”

Oh God, yes!”

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The Feldspar Column: Hug Your Mom Up

Nine column inches of hot throbbing opinions

Hey homies! What up, yo? Sorry, it’s been ages – years, eons – since I last updated the blog. I’ve been preoccupied. I recently got a book deal! That’s right, I’ll be legitimately published. (I’m still doing my self-published erotica.) More details as they become available. Minor spoilers, it’s still in the finishing stages. If you like meaty muscular dudes swinging around their two-handed swords – and using their weapons – you’ll totally dig this new novella.

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That’s not available right now. What is available is my short story, The Housewife and the Heat Wave. [Click on the link to purchase.] Perfect for Mother’s Day. Short, sweet, and hot. It tells the story of a college sophomore named Kevin. During a summer heat wave, he is mowing lawns in the neighborhood for some extra college money. He becomes friendly with Lana, a sex-starved housewife and mother of two. One thing leads to another and … well … I’ll post an explicit excerpt so you get the idea.

Moms hold a very special place in erotica. Fecund goddesses who nurture and comfort even the most brutally rugged of men, they fuel our transgressive thoughts. MILFs, stepmoms, we love them all. Our dark desires made manifest in crude fantasies and delicious combinations. But make no mistake, this isn’t about objectification – although physicality does play into it – because what makes erotica wonderful is harnessing these selfsame bawdy fantasies to bittersweet emotions. Erotic desire links to tragic emotional desperation. Sometimes the MILF cheating on her husband has to do with sadness or revenge or frivolity. The adultery in Unfaithful unfolded by an almost random spontaneity. The consequences became sad and horrendous because there was no inherent malice or animus in Diane Lane’s character’s behavior. (Great movie, by the way.)

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I’m hoping to post more often. It’s been too long without some sort of update. Things have been crazy for a while. On top of maintaining my crumbling family estate in [location redacted], there’s this global pandemic going, economic uncertainty, and other issues. Shutdown has been a challenge. My other two housemates – Dick Midnight and Lady Priapus – have been at each other’s throats. The Feldspar Family Estate is large, but it ain’t no Versailles, yo.

We’re all purveyors of erotic narrative here. I have my stories of MILFs and cheating boyfriends. Dick Midnight specializes in gay erotica. His latest project – among his many unfinished works – is something he describes as “Starship Troopers meets the first reel of Brideshead Revisited meets Tom of Finland.” Meanwhile Lady Priapus is working on a piece she calls “Wraeththu meets Warhammer 40K meets Guardians of the Galaxy.”

Unfortunately, like myself, Lady Priapus and Dick Midnight write at a glacial pace and are stingy perfectionists. Since we’re not in it for the money – side note, buy my stories – we can focus on things like quality control and expert cover design. I would like to write trashy paperback novels in spirit, but I also don’t want to slap my name on the side of something that reads like I was paid by the word. Plus, I value you – yes, you, dear reader – and I don’t believe in giving you substandard product. Just because erotica isn’t as legitimate as other genres, doesn’t mean we have to lower our standards. In my mind, my ideal story would be as well-crafted as anything by John Updike, John Updike, or Louis Auchincloss, but it would have more money shots and muscular young studs sleeping with suburban moms.

I hope I haven’t sounded too long-winded and/or pretentious. Tell me what you think in the comments below. Like, comment, and subscribe. Ya know, the usual social media bullshit.

“Hitting the Rebound” now on Excitica!

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Hitting the Rebound is now available for download at Excitica.com!

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Ford is the a community college professor having an affair with his student, Tania. Her sister, Milena, is a freshman at the same community college. When Tania has to work a double shift at the diner, Ford has to work damage control when Milena comes over, recently dumped and angry. After calming her down, Ford attempts to comfort Milena. Milena comes on to Ford, despite Ford’s best efforts to stop her advances, but their lusts prevail.

 

“Hitting the Rebound” explicit excerpt!

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Hey loyal readers, Lloyd Feldspar here.  I’m included in the new Excessica anthology After School Special: 15 Book Excite Spice MEGA Bundle (and in print too!)

If you’re still on the fence in terms of buying this erotica bundle, I’m here to give you a free taste.  Below is an explicit excerpt from my story, “Hitting the Rebound.”  To put it in context, Ford Stratham, the hapless protagonist of The Tattletale: a Romance, is in another spot of bother.  Living in Orion, California, a fictional town like a decadent and depraved version of San Diego, he works at the community college and is dating a Latina diner waitress.  One day, his girlfriend is at the diner pulling a double shift.  He ends up dealing with her little sister, who had recently been dumped.  His negotiations with the little sister take a turn for the hot and horny.  Enjoy!

After a few moments of uncomfortable silence, Milena sighed with a loud flap of the lips. She picked at her Band-Aid with a bored look on her face. Even her glowy rectangle, the omnipresent Smartphone, gave her no solace.

“I’m bored. Wanta fuck?” she asked.

Ford, taken aback, could only stutter.

“I–,” he said. “Um, well.”

“Don’t you think I’m pretty?”

“No, no, don’t. Don’t do that.”

“Do what?”

“Don’t play that game. It’s obvious. I’m sorry, I’ve seen it done too many times.”

“You don’t want it?”

“Yes, no, yes. Dammit, stop!”

Her hand found its way to rest on Ford’s fly.

“I think you want to.” She smiled as he hand attempted to slide into his jeans.

“Don’t do this, Milena. I have to grade papers. I have to make lunch. You should leave.” All this tumbled out in a rapid cascade, an unthinking blabber.

“I want to fuck you.” She slid over, her lips close to his ear, her voice a silky whisper. “And I know you want to be inside me.”

“Fuck off, you whore!” Ford blurted as he pushed her away. “No, I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to call you that. You’re not. I can’t. I just can’t. As much as I want to, I just can’t.”

“You and Tania? What are you engaged or something?”

“No, but you’re her sister.” He couldn’t emphasize it with any more clarity.

“So?”

“Didn’t you hear me. You are Tania’s sister. Equals: not gonna happen.”

Granted, Tania and Ford’s relationship constituted fuckbuddy status, but even Ford conceded such a thing came with its own set of limits. Random one-night stands not really forbidden, although neither voiced it in such stark terms. Still, even in a relationship so porous, so nebulous, so informal, you didn’t sport fuck her sister.

Least of all in her apartment while she worked a double at a shitbox diner.

By the time Ford formulated these thoughts, his lips tasted Milena’s. He tasted her tongue and realized his hands now caressed her clothing with a psychotic desperation; a hand on her blouse, palming her breast, and the other cradling her tight firm ass. In those seconds, his cock, now eager and erect, threatened to burst through his jeans and explode with spermy abundance.

“NO!!!” he shouted, throwing Milena off again.

“Fuck you, maricon!” she spat with venom. “Eres un mariposo with grading your papers, you with un pene de soga, you limp dick!”

“God, seriously. I really wish you did call for One Direction tickets.”

“What?”

“That’s why I thought you called. Not, you know, guy trouble and shit.”

“You think I listen to One Direction? How old do you think I am?”

“Your sister said you were a freshman.” Was this a break from the sexual tension? Ford thought. “As you can probably tell, I’m phenomenally out of touch with today’s pop cultural trends.”

“Christ, you sound like a fucking textbook. ‘Pop cultural trends,’” She let out a belly laugh. “My Little Pony blah blah blah gender roles discursive modernity Foucault Transformers: Rise of the Fallen makes my dick hard cuz I totally dig big-ass robots and shit.”

“Okay, that’s seriously funny. Do you even know what discursive means?” Ford said with a laugh. “Although, to be fair, some of my fellow colleagues don’t even know. Just plop that word down and a couple Foucault and Derrida references in your article and bam! Published. And the Transformers movie wasn’t that bad.”

She looked at him, dumbfounded, like he started speaking Ancient Greek.

“It wasn’t that good either. But, you know, big robots and shit. I do exist outside my role as college professor. I’m not a piece of meat.”

“That’s debatable,” Milena said with an impish smirk.

“Can I be serious for a moment?”

She nodded.

“I would really, really, really like to fuckmake l—you know, have sex with you. Sorry, that sounds too clinical. But I just can’t. Least of all in your sister’s apartment. You’re gorgeous, the guy who dumped you is a total idiot, and I’m sure finding another guy to fuck on a recreational basis won’t be hard. Just not me. Please, not me.”

Even as he said these words, Ford knew he lacked the ironclad conviction required. He plowed onward.

“I used to be engaged. Then I had a trip to England. It was because I was working on a project with my Ph. D advisor. Long story. In any case, the point being: I started having sex with his daughter. It didn’t end well. It didn’t end well at all. My fiancee dumped me. I had to leave my Ph.D. program. It was only after a lot of hard work and bending over backwards for total assholes that I finally got my Ph.D. But now I’m working at the bottom and I have to claw myself out.”

“You sound like an Afterschool Special.”

“Doesn’t mean I’m wrong.”

“She doesn’t have to find out.”

“She is working a double today. Won’t be home until at least eleven tonight.”

“It’s not even noon yet,” Milena said.

“Your argument is persuasive, but I’m standing by my principles,” he said, then adding, “Dammit.”

“Say that again.”

“I’m stand

Their mouths met again.

“You’re making a bad decision,” he said between kisses. “You’re not right in the head. Emotions leading you.”

She unbuttoned her blouse, revealing more of her nymphic body, slender and caramel-colored.

“Don’t make me your rebound,” he pleaded, fake-pleaded. “Don’t do this to get back at what’s-his-name?”

“Too much talking,” she said, bra unsnapped and momentarily suspended on her buoyant breasts.

Ford stopped talking. Then his mouth busied itself on her nipples, tonguing each until they hardened into little buds. His mouth engulfed her breast, his tongue giving way for his teeth to clench on a brown nipple and to pull it.

She mewled like a kitten.

Ford worked hard to unbuckle her jeans while Milena fumbled with his zipper. With his jeans around his ankles, he got up and pushed Milena back on the couch. He pulled her jeans down to her ankles and then slid down her panties. Nearly naked, he ripped off her jeans and panties to begin licking the short black hairs between her legs. She moaned while Ford’s tongue explored her labial folds and then discovered the treasures of her inner cunt.

“Oh God, oh fuck,” she groaned.

He fingered her pussy and found the pink jewel. Licking it made Milena jerk. She breathed hard, attempting to control the ferocious spasms wracking her body.

Then he inserted a second finger into her cunt.

Then three.

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